Narrative Problems

After our pitch, we decided that our feedback was leaning too heavily on the fact that our original idea could be potentially boring. We therefore needed to meet up and try and come up with an altered idea.

We still want to keep the idea of heavy emphasis on a couple in love, if possible. What we need to consider is creating a more detailed narrative, to generate more interest for the duration of the song.

Also we need to further consider how the narrative and the performance element of the video match up to each other, and who is going to play each part in the video.