Changes To Make For Video

These are a list of suggestions that Mr Smith and Mrs Somel made whilst watching our video draft so far. Also we picked some advice from last years examiners report that was published.

• Closer up Shots.
• Re-dress Paul and Jack.
• Show more emphasis on Mark as the "leader".
• Introduce Alison earlier.
• Why are we going after her? What connection do we have?
• Added alarm clock shots. Use variety.
• Buying the ice cream. Introduce the sequence. e.g. she is too warm, Paul gets the idea and gets her an ice cream, then finish the sequence.
• Give STRAWBERRY ice cream to Alison.
• More performance shots, all in the same place.
• Shorter shot lengths in places.
• Focus on having suitable locations per shot, but avoid repittion of the same area.
• Dont' use the same bit of footage twice, new footage for each shot (we've not done this, but it is something we need to be aware regardless).